Poetry Project
This poetry project was the final project for our humanities class. During this project we looked at many different poems in different style to get a feel for what we liked, we also learned how to understand the deep meaning in a poem. Next we use what we have learned and wrote our own poem and present it at our all school exhibition.
Poem and Artist statement
“Dear Readers”
You are a mindless drunk, staggering down the street, a man fatigued with envy, fueled by jealousy, a frame without a painting, useless like the tailbone, a sculptor with no hands, an architect without a vision, a person with no goal, a man devoid of endeavor. For you are so irrelevant, the vultures fills sorrow, for every step you take, disaster will follow, for once there was beauty, now only acrid charred ash, for you say they're small problems, but you all still clash. A static figure tied down with chains, a cluster of anger and popping veins, a mad dog that needs to be trained, a tendency that must be contained. For dead bodies they lay, maggots and all, vessels for the minds they once contained, for a beautiful coffin may mask the putrefying smell, and you are the monster that I need to expel. So I say to you,“Dear reader” I am the voice, and the reader. My art piece for my poem.
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Zoell Tshering Lhomi Nuppa
This poem is my perspective on someone I hate with all my life. I am not someone who really hates anyone, but the person I am describing in my poem gets on my nerves every single time, with no fail. Who is this person Zoell hates? You may be thinking, well that's easy, it's you, the reader. In the first stanza, I am calling the reader useless, I am calling them an empty vessel with no goal and passion, a mere puppet, hence the line “a person with no goal, a man devoid of endeavor.” In the second stanza, I am saying how irrelevant the reader is and how everything is in chaos because of their carelessness and stupidity, hence the line“for every step you take, disaster will follow.” In the first line of the third stanza, “A static figure tied down with chains” I use a static figure as a representation of a character that does not undergo an important change over the course of a story. Implying that the reader is an unchanging piece of human garbage which leads them to be even more useless, also I am trying to imply that the reader has intentionally chained themselves meaning they are not willing to change. The rest of the stanza is basically calling the reader an angry person who needs to calm down. In the fourth stanza, I am calling the reader rotten on the inside while portraying them as a normal person on the outside, hence the line “for a beautiful coffin may mask the putrefying smell”. I am also implying that the reader is a puppet being controlled by the influences around them hence the line, “For dead bodies they lay, maggots and all, vessels for the minds they once contained”. In the final stanza, there is a big tone twist, the previous four stanzas had been expressing my hate for the readers for no apparent reason, with little to no emphasis on who the “reader” is. Well, the reader is me, hence the line “So I say to you, “Dear reader”, I am the voice, and the reader.” For as long as I can remember I have been very self-critical, I have never been satisfied with what I do, whether it be writing an essay or the way I sit, I never thought I was good enough. Eventually, this extreme self-criticism turned into hatred; hatred towards myself. Whatever I did, I was not good enough for myself, I was essentially useless. Because of this, I had a lot of anger built up inside me with no outlet, so I never let my anger out bottling up all my emotions. Leaving me tired and eventually depressed. The world around me had turned blunt and boring, nothing excited me, I was lifeless. This really affected me in school, I stopped trying and stopped putting any effort into my work. Leading me to have bad grades and hate myself even more. Although I have been doing better recently, I still hate myself and I am still very self-critical. This is very hard sometimes but it's a part of me so I decided to write this poem to express how I feel about myself to other people, as it's a hard topic for me to talk about. So this poem was the best I could express myself. |
Refection
Before we started this project, I really disliked poetry. I would even go as far to say I hated it. I think it could be because school forced it on me for years or it may be because the poems I was reading had no deeper meaning to them. On the other hand, throughout this project we read a lot of poems and most, if not all of them were hands down beautiful. Poems like “Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas” and “Dulce Et Decorum Est” from my perspective are masterpieces, and these poems represent the art that words hold. Both of these poems held such deep meaning and beauty which really inspired me to also write a poem just as good as these ones. And hence started my quest to write the best poem! In my 1st draft I really did not know what I was doing, I was using none of the poetic devices that were given, heck I had no idea what my poem was about at all, all I knew was that it should have a happy tone to it. In the 2nd draft, It was more of the same as the first draft, however I decided that the poem is going to have a positive message hence the line “Don't let the crowd take you, for you are special like a shining gem.” In the 3rd draft however, I took a 180 degree turn from what I initially planned, instead of a happy tone I decided to go with a darker and angry tone and instead because I wrote a gruesome yet soothing line and decided to stick with the line being “For dead bodies they lay, maggots and all, vessels for the minds they once contained,” and decided to use metaphors as my main poetic device hence the first stanza “You are a mindless drunk, staggering down the street, a man fatigued with envy, fueled by jealousy, a frame without a painting, useless like the tailbone, a sculptor with no hands, an architect without a vision,a person with no goal, a man devoid of endeavor.” But before the 4th stanza, I read over the 3rd stanza one more time and realized that the hate I was projecting to the “readers” were the same thing I thought about myself which gave me the idea to make a twist at the end and telling the people reading my poem that I was the reader all along.
One important change I made to my poem was altering the tone. I could not use the initial happy tone because the third draft of my poem was kinda gruesome I decided to go with a dark and angry tone. To accomplish this I used negative words to insult myself or the “readers”, words like “irrelevant” and “mindless” really played well and gave the poem the dark tone I wanted. On top of that I made a rhyme scheme for stanzas with a lot of emotion, this really made the poem flow especially with the dark tone, it also added to the anger aspect to the tone. For example all of my 3rd stanza has this aspect “A static figure tied down with chains, a cluster of anger and popping veins, a mad dog that needs to be trained, a tendency that must be contained.”
The other major change I made to my poem is the actual meaning of it. At the beginning of this project I wanted my poem to have a positive message for the readers but I decided not to go with it because that was such an overused topic. So I decided to completely change my poem, and instead expressed my hatred towards the readers. At the time I did not have a concrete reason why I was writing about this, I was not in a good headspace and resorted to this topic because I had no other ideas, it was a very impulsive decision but this seemed like a good idea to me at the time. By the 4th draft, I was too far in to back out so I decided to just build on this more. But, then I realized something crucial, the things that I was writing down was the same way I viewed myself, a useless person. So I decided to change the poem's meaning again. This time with feedback from my peers, I had a concrete idea, and knew what I was doing. I decided to call the “reader” useless at the beginning then reveal that the reader is me at the end. Hence the line “So I say to you, “Dear reader” I am the voice, and the reader.”
The final major change I made actually happened after the 4th draft, after we were done with all our drafts we had to present our poems to small groups and get feedback. And the one main feedback I got was to add another stanza to make the flow of my poem even better, which sounds easy right? No. My perfectionist side didn't let me write a simple stanza, it had to be good and it had to have a lot of meaning. So I thought about it and looked back at my poem and my life. What can I add? What should I address? Then it clicked, I wanted to express the anger that I was building up inside me because of how much I hated myself. I really wanted to imply this because the anger inside me really affected me both emotionally and physically and I thought that writing this down would be the best way to vent this anger. Hence I came up with the stanza “A static figure tied down with chains, a cluster of anger and popping veins, a mad dog that needs to be trained, a tendency that must be contained.”
One important change I made to my poem was altering the tone. I could not use the initial happy tone because the third draft of my poem was kinda gruesome I decided to go with a dark and angry tone. To accomplish this I used negative words to insult myself or the “readers”, words like “irrelevant” and “mindless” really played well and gave the poem the dark tone I wanted. On top of that I made a rhyme scheme for stanzas with a lot of emotion, this really made the poem flow especially with the dark tone, it also added to the anger aspect to the tone. For example all of my 3rd stanza has this aspect “A static figure tied down with chains, a cluster of anger and popping veins, a mad dog that needs to be trained, a tendency that must be contained.”
The other major change I made to my poem is the actual meaning of it. At the beginning of this project I wanted my poem to have a positive message for the readers but I decided not to go with it because that was such an overused topic. So I decided to completely change my poem, and instead expressed my hatred towards the readers. At the time I did not have a concrete reason why I was writing about this, I was not in a good headspace and resorted to this topic because I had no other ideas, it was a very impulsive decision but this seemed like a good idea to me at the time. By the 4th draft, I was too far in to back out so I decided to just build on this more. But, then I realized something crucial, the things that I was writing down was the same way I viewed myself, a useless person. So I decided to change the poem's meaning again. This time with feedback from my peers, I had a concrete idea, and knew what I was doing. I decided to call the “reader” useless at the beginning then reveal that the reader is me at the end. Hence the line “So I say to you, “Dear reader” I am the voice, and the reader.”
The final major change I made actually happened after the 4th draft, after we were done with all our drafts we had to present our poems to small groups and get feedback. And the one main feedback I got was to add another stanza to make the flow of my poem even better, which sounds easy right? No. My perfectionist side didn't let me write a simple stanza, it had to be good and it had to have a lot of meaning. So I thought about it and looked back at my poem and my life. What can I add? What should I address? Then it clicked, I wanted to express the anger that I was building up inside me because of how much I hated myself. I really wanted to imply this because the anger inside me really affected me both emotionally and physically and I thought that writing this down would be the best way to vent this anger. Hence I came up with the stanza “A static figure tied down with chains, a cluster of anger and popping veins, a mad dog that needs to be trained, a tendency that must be contained.”
MUN Project
A few weeks ago the 10th grade started our MUN project, we were assigned the task of tackling the current Afghanistan Humanitarian Crisis. After the American troops were withdrawn from Afghanistan on the summer of 2021 ending the 20 year long war, the Taliban's took over the country. Because of this the country was in utter chaos, innocent people being killed, violation of many human rights, etc. So we decided to do a replication of a UN meeting. We were assigned as different countries and representing our country we were suppose to professionally solve the issue in hand by writing different resolutions.
Policy Paper
Country's full name: Rossiyskaya Federatsiya
Name: Zoell Tshering Lhomi Nuppa
Policy Statement:
We, the Great Country of Russia, recognize the Taliban as the official governor of Afghanistan, we will assist them to stabilize their government and keep a close relation with the Taliban’s. Although we assist the Taliban’s, we will step in if there is any violation of Human Rights
After 20 long years in Afghanistan the US troops were finally withdrawn last summer, but following the withdrawal the Taliban’s made their move and on August 15, 2021, the Taliban’s had taken over Kabul (the capital of Afghanistan). This was when everything went downhill, women’s rights were 0 to none, major banks in the country were closed, public executions were performed to the people who “went against their God's rules”. Because of this the economy collapsed and lives were at stake, about 55% of the population or 23 million people are currently starving, according to excerpt 1 million children are expected to die by winter. What an unfortunate time this is for both Afghanistan and the world, where people have to burn their possession to keep warm and sell their children to feed their siblings. Not only this, but the unfair treatment of women and girls. The Taliban have made it so that women are not allowed to work and girls not being able to go to school after the 6th grade, although women's and girls are protesting against this they are unsuccessful rather they're whipped and worst killed. Human rights activist being punished publicly to make a statement, not only this but translator who worked for the US being publicly shamed, tortured and executed. Millions trying to flee the country, but unfortunately many have lost their lives doing this and most unsuccessful.
Because of these reasons, we strongly believe that we should recognize the Taliban as the official governor of Afghanistan and that this is our best option to reach out and help the 23 million starving Afghans and potentially save the 1 million children that are expected to die. Not only this, we can also keep a good eye on the Taliban’s, so they don't exploit their power and doesn't violet any Human Rights especially the rights of women and girls. If we do recognize the Taliban as the official government; they will heavily rely on foreign aid, so if we hear about any abuse of power or violation of Human Rights we will cut their foreign aid by half and if they still don't change their way we will cut the money completely. We hope that it doesn't come to this, but we still want them to know that their actions will have consequences. We could also work with the Taliban’s to improve the healthcare system and use the foreign aid to pay the doctors, so hospitals are more accessible. We can also starts camps where we can feed people and give them first aid if needed.
Country's full name: Rossiyskaya Federatsiya
Name: Zoell Tshering Lhomi Nuppa
Policy Statement:
We, the Great Country of Russia, recognize the Taliban as the official governor of Afghanistan, we will assist them to stabilize their government and keep a close relation with the Taliban’s. Although we assist the Taliban’s, we will step in if there is any violation of Human Rights
After 20 long years in Afghanistan the US troops were finally withdrawn last summer, but following the withdrawal the Taliban’s made their move and on August 15, 2021, the Taliban’s had taken over Kabul (the capital of Afghanistan). This was when everything went downhill, women’s rights were 0 to none, major banks in the country were closed, public executions were performed to the people who “went against their God's rules”. Because of this the economy collapsed and lives were at stake, about 55% of the population or 23 million people are currently starving, according to excerpt 1 million children are expected to die by winter. What an unfortunate time this is for both Afghanistan and the world, where people have to burn their possession to keep warm and sell their children to feed their siblings. Not only this, but the unfair treatment of women and girls. The Taliban have made it so that women are not allowed to work and girls not being able to go to school after the 6th grade, although women's and girls are protesting against this they are unsuccessful rather they're whipped and worst killed. Human rights activist being punished publicly to make a statement, not only this but translator who worked for the US being publicly shamed, tortured and executed. Millions trying to flee the country, but unfortunately many have lost their lives doing this and most unsuccessful.
Because of these reasons, we strongly believe that we should recognize the Taliban as the official governor of Afghanistan and that this is our best option to reach out and help the 23 million starving Afghans and potentially save the 1 million children that are expected to die. Not only this, we can also keep a good eye on the Taliban’s, so they don't exploit their power and doesn't violet any Human Rights especially the rights of women and girls. If we do recognize the Taliban as the official government; they will heavily rely on foreign aid, so if we hear about any abuse of power or violation of Human Rights we will cut their foreign aid by half and if they still don't change their way we will cut the money completely. We hope that it doesn't come to this, but we still want them to know that their actions will have consequences. We could also work with the Taliban’s to improve the healthcare system and use the foreign aid to pay the doctors, so hospitals are more accessible. We can also starts camps where we can feed people and give them first aid if needed.
Project Reflection
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THE MASK PROJECT
Identity Crisis During Adolescences
My mask project was about identity crisis during adolescence, and how many people going though it wear an invisible mask hiding their true personality and how it may effect them. because this is a very shrugged off topic I wanted more people to be aware about it, so we can help people going through this.
Identity Crisis During Asolecesed
As I sat there in a circle, Finn to my right and Cash to my left, I snapped back to reality when Kelly was speaking. I was in a seminar, people around me making valid, very good points while I sat there like a statue not talking, thinking to myself, “Should I say something, naw this is a stupid thing to say, my peers will judge me if I say somethi-” “ok guys this is all for today.” said Lori, as I walked out of class feeling like an idiot. I asked myself why, why I was doubting myself, why I believed my work was bad, I brushed it off telling myself I was just “not feeling myself today”. That was the beginning of what I like to call Being a Dumbass or also known as, Overthinking.
Because of many experiences like this, I started doubting myself and slowly started to act differently, I was not truly me but was wearing a mask. I hated myself because I was not me, and day by day for weeks I lived with this guilt, and one day I forgot who I actually was. I was frustrated, I punched my door, rumpled my blanket in rage, I screamed in my pillow so my parents sleeping next door would not hear me, but not a single drop of tear came out of my eyes, maybe because I was tough. Or maybe because I gave up. I lay with an empty mind for a bit, I sighed and smirked, told myself, “Imagine giving up what a loser,” and finally went to bed.
In today's rapidly changing world a lot of people, especially people going through adolescence, suffer from an identity crisis. Although most people are aware what an identity crisis is, but for the few individuals who don't know, according to google “An identity crisis is a developmental event that involves a person questioning their sense of self or place in the world”. Questions like, who am I? And, why am I like this? Very common among the individuals going through this, they wear this invisible mask and pretend to be a completely different person. Although it doesn't sound that bad, it's additive. Once you wear this mask it's hard to stop wearing it; it becomes a daily essential. People going through identity crisis will figure out what they are going through fairly quickly, but will choose not to resolve it because “they're ok with how things are '' they're very good liars. They hide all and every emotion from everyone and even the person or people closest to them. I empathize with these people; maybe because I am one of them. According to the attachment theory, we develop personality starting at a very young age according to our surroundings and how they were raised. Most of the time we stick with the personality unless something big happens like a family member passing away, parents separating or outside judgment and influence from friends or peer pressure. It can start out small from jumping a fence to vandalising something and can get worst, I personally have experienced peer pressure and have done some stupid stuff because of it.
I still vividly remember the first time I skipped class, I was in the 6th grade. My friend pressured me to do so, although I didn't want to, my 12 year old self thought that I would be called a wimp if I didn't. I took a deep breath and told myself I would be ok and proceed to follow my friends. We were quiet as possible the only thing you could hear was the sound of trees moving, we snuck around the guards jumped a wall behind the soccer field and walked to a ally behind the school “यो ठाउँ हो” said one of my friends (translation- this is the place) I sat on the curb and was trying to calm myself , My heart was beating so fast it would put Usain Bolt to shame, my face was bright red because of how nervous I was. We stayed on the spot talking for about 15 minutes but to me it was like an eternity, I felt like time had slowed down for me. But then, one of my friends shouted at us and told us to run, we were busted and the principal and a guard were on their way. I ran faster than ever before and somehow managed to escape. I hid in the bathroom out of breath and tired. I threw up, I never skipped class after that (not counting online classes).
Although peer pressure can get to me from time to time, I have learned to say no even though it may be hard sometimes. And I personally think a lot of people need to learn how to say no too, and be themselves around other people and not really care what people may think about us, because at the end of the day ( really off topic but I strongly believe I should add this) other people are too worried about what other people think about them that they forget to judge other people; so in conclusion be yourself.
In short “Humans are a very interesting bunch of creatures, most humans seek approval from other humans. It can either be their family or friends and sometimes even a random stranger they just met. Because of this they tend to do things they don't want to do, it makes them take risks even when they are aware of the consequences, they get fed with complements and praise when they takes these risks which gives them a fake sensation of “greatness” they subconsciously start desiring more of it, which leads to them taking more risk and create this new personality.” I strongly believe that we should talk more about identity crisis and make more people more aware about it because it's such a shrugged off topic, and help the people who are going through identity crisis the best we can. “Is this a good conclusion? Naw, I should just give up”.
As I sat there in a circle, Finn to my right and Cash to my left, I snapped back to reality when Kelly was speaking. I was in a seminar, people around me making valid, very good points while I sat there like a statue not talking, thinking to myself, “Should I say something, naw this is a stupid thing to say, my peers will judge me if I say somethi-” “ok guys this is all for today.” said Lori, as I walked out of class feeling like an idiot. I asked myself why, why I was doubting myself, why I believed my work was bad, I brushed it off telling myself I was just “not feeling myself today”. That was the beginning of what I like to call Being a Dumbass or also known as, Overthinking.
Because of many experiences like this, I started doubting myself and slowly started to act differently, I was not truly me but was wearing a mask. I hated myself because I was not me, and day by day for weeks I lived with this guilt, and one day I forgot who I actually was. I was frustrated, I punched my door, rumpled my blanket in rage, I screamed in my pillow so my parents sleeping next door would not hear me, but not a single drop of tear came out of my eyes, maybe because I was tough. Or maybe because I gave up. I lay with an empty mind for a bit, I sighed and smirked, told myself, “Imagine giving up what a loser,” and finally went to bed.
In today's rapidly changing world a lot of people, especially people going through adolescence, suffer from an identity crisis. Although most people are aware what an identity crisis is, but for the few individuals who don't know, according to google “An identity crisis is a developmental event that involves a person questioning their sense of self or place in the world”. Questions like, who am I? And, why am I like this? Very common among the individuals going through this, they wear this invisible mask and pretend to be a completely different person. Although it doesn't sound that bad, it's additive. Once you wear this mask it's hard to stop wearing it; it becomes a daily essential. People going through identity crisis will figure out what they are going through fairly quickly, but will choose not to resolve it because “they're ok with how things are '' they're very good liars. They hide all and every emotion from everyone and even the person or people closest to them. I empathize with these people; maybe because I am one of them. According to the attachment theory, we develop personality starting at a very young age according to our surroundings and how they were raised. Most of the time we stick with the personality unless something big happens like a family member passing away, parents separating or outside judgment and influence from friends or peer pressure. It can start out small from jumping a fence to vandalising something and can get worst, I personally have experienced peer pressure and have done some stupid stuff because of it.
I still vividly remember the first time I skipped class, I was in the 6th grade. My friend pressured me to do so, although I didn't want to, my 12 year old self thought that I would be called a wimp if I didn't. I took a deep breath and told myself I would be ok and proceed to follow my friends. We were quiet as possible the only thing you could hear was the sound of trees moving, we snuck around the guards jumped a wall behind the soccer field and walked to a ally behind the school “यो ठाउँ हो” said one of my friends (translation- this is the place) I sat on the curb and was trying to calm myself , My heart was beating so fast it would put Usain Bolt to shame, my face was bright red because of how nervous I was. We stayed on the spot talking for about 15 minutes but to me it was like an eternity, I felt like time had slowed down for me. But then, one of my friends shouted at us and told us to run, we were busted and the principal and a guard were on their way. I ran faster than ever before and somehow managed to escape. I hid in the bathroom out of breath and tired. I threw up, I never skipped class after that (not counting online classes).
Although peer pressure can get to me from time to time, I have learned to say no even though it may be hard sometimes. And I personally think a lot of people need to learn how to say no too, and be themselves around other people and not really care what people may think about us, because at the end of the day ( really off topic but I strongly believe I should add this) other people are too worried about what other people think about them that they forget to judge other people; so in conclusion be yourself.
In short “Humans are a very interesting bunch of creatures, most humans seek approval from other humans. It can either be their family or friends and sometimes even a random stranger they just met. Because of this they tend to do things they don't want to do, it makes them take risks even when they are aware of the consequences, they get fed with complements and praise when they takes these risks which gives them a fake sensation of “greatness” they subconsciously start desiring more of it, which leads to them taking more risk and create this new personality.” I strongly believe that we should talk more about identity crisis and make more people more aware about it because it's such a shrugged off topic, and help the people who are going through identity crisis the best we can. “Is this a good conclusion? Naw, I should just give up”.
Project reflection
1. Explain how you grew as a writer in this project. Be specific, go back through your essay to find evidence. If possible, compare specific examples from an earlier draft with your final draft, and discuss how your essay changed, and why those changes made it a stronger piece of writing.
- I think I really grew as a writer this semester, mainly because of all the feedback and tips I got from my teachers and peers, one example is this certain line “That was the beginning of what I like to call Being a Dumbass or also known as, Overthinking.” This is honestly one of my favorite likes from my essay but before this, it was very long and not getting to the point ( I apologize for not having the previous unedited version of this.) but like I said thanks to the help of my peers I was able to write this beautiful line.
2. What are your largest takeaways from this project, and how have they transformed the way you see the world or yourself? This could be from any part of the project: the content, the essay and mask, the design thinking process, exhibition prep, or the exhibition itself.
- I think my biggest takeaway from this project is how there are so many problems in this world. At the beginning of this project I just wanted to get my stuff done and be free, but when I actually took time to look around at other people's masks I saw so many mental health stuff, which honestly was very sad, and I realized all the different issues people are facing day to day.
3. How do you feel you have grown as a project worker and student throughout the course of this semester? Be specific and provide evidence!
- I don't really think I grew that much as a project worker, but I am very happy that I didn't let my perfectionist side take over, otherwise I would have never finished the project assigned to me, and I am very proud of that.
4. Describe what you did as a group member and how it contributed to the success of our exhibition. Include what you would change or do differently if you were to do this project again.
- I have to be honest I really didn't contribute to making the infographic, but my friend Cash did most of it, I really was a bad group mate, but I did make up for that with my presentation skills during the exhibition.
- I think I really grew as a writer this semester, mainly because of all the feedback and tips I got from my teachers and peers, one example is this certain line “That was the beginning of what I like to call Being a Dumbass or also known as, Overthinking.” This is honestly one of my favorite likes from my essay but before this, it was very long and not getting to the point ( I apologize for not having the previous unedited version of this.) but like I said thanks to the help of my peers I was able to write this beautiful line.
2. What are your largest takeaways from this project, and how have they transformed the way you see the world or yourself? This could be from any part of the project: the content, the essay and mask, the design thinking process, exhibition prep, or the exhibition itself.
- I think my biggest takeaway from this project is how there are so many problems in this world. At the beginning of this project I just wanted to get my stuff done and be free, but when I actually took time to look around at other people's masks I saw so many mental health stuff, which honestly was very sad, and I realized all the different issues people are facing day to day.
3. How do you feel you have grown as a project worker and student throughout the course of this semester? Be specific and provide evidence!
- I don't really think I grew that much as a project worker, but I am very happy that I didn't let my perfectionist side take over, otherwise I would have never finished the project assigned to me, and I am very proud of that.
4. Describe what you did as a group member and how it contributed to the success of our exhibition. Include what you would change or do differently if you were to do this project again.
- I have to be honest I really didn't contribute to making the infographic, but my friend Cash did most of it, I really was a bad group mate, but I did make up for that with my presentation skills during the exhibition.